Few Word Stories #5

“I missed you,” he said.

“Liar,” she replied.

“Ask them,” he pointed at the stars.

And they blinked in agreement.

 

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58 Comments Add yours

    1. Aphrodite says:

      Thanks my love :*

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  1. Army_Tales says:

    Lovely imagination πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰

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  2. Bhanu says:

    He fooled her ! πŸ˜›
    Stars always blink πŸ˜€
    Well if the Moon would have blinked it would have helped πŸ˜‰

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    1. Aphrodite says:

      Nah, he didn’t fool her. He took their help coz she didn’t believe him. And does the moon blink? I think otherwise.

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      1. Bhanu says:

        The time taken by the light to travel from the ‘Star’ to ‘Earth’ is billion years !
        For sound to travel from ‘Earth’ to ‘Star’ will in trillion years !
        So how did the stars blink back soon ?

        Moon doesn’t, hence if he could get the Moon blink, then he can prove he was not lying !

        I am just messing with you ! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

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      2. Aphrodite says:

        Stars already blink. He took advantage of it. Plus, saying that moon blinked would have been messing with ‘that’ girl!

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      3. Bhanu says:

        I don’t have anything to say πŸ™‚

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  3. Aww! Its so sweet!!! ❀

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    1. Aphrodite says:

      Thank you Shreya. πŸ™‚

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  4. enigma says:

    It was a rainy day. Sorry. πŸ˜›

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    1. Aphrodite says:

      Hahahahahaha. Don’t be so hard hearted on the girl. πŸ™‚

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      1. enigma says:

        Just the reality check.
        And it’s him who woukd be lying right? πŸ˜›

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      2. Aphrodite says:

        No. At least I didn’t mean him to lie. Rest, it is open to interpretations.

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      3. enigma says:

        She : But it’s raining. Where are tbr stars?
        He: …

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      4. Aphrodite says:

        Why do you want it to rain so badly? πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›

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      5. enigma says:

        He : Wait for the rain to stop …
        *It’s cyclone. It rained for at least a month and still going on*

        Don’t kill me now, please.

        Because why not. πŸ˜›

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      6. Aphrodite says:

        Hahahahahaha. Take your artistic liberty there. It’s allowed. πŸ˜‰

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      7. enigma says:

        *the rains finally stopped. The sky was clear.*
        He: Finally.
        She : It’s afternoon. No stars. Yet.
        Disney (shouting) : End it already,man. Just end it.

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      8. Aphrodite says:

        Where is this going, I have no idea! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜›

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      9. enigma says:

        It’s called “A few more and a few more words story”, duh!

        He : *taps on tbe coffee table and checks time 12:05 PM*
        She : I have bedn waiting for 3 weeks for those stars.
        He : Just a few more hours.
        *after 5 hours*
        He: *checks his watch : 12:08PM*
        She : …

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      10. Aphrodite says:

        Keep going on till you feel like. πŸ™‚

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      11. enigma says:

        Lol.

        She : I have a Boyfriend.
        He : You are telling me now?

        Dum-das-dum. The end.

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  5. Jackie Jain says:

    Wow Ankita. . Very beautiful. . Nice concept. Liked it. But I wonder whether the stars blinked in agreement with boy’s words of ‘I missed you’ or girl’s word ‘Liar’. . Haha. . πŸ˜› Just saying. .

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    1. Aphrodite says:

      As I said, it’s open to interpretations. But I would rather believe that they nodded in agreement with the boy. πŸ™‚

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      1. Jackie Jain says:

        Yes. . There are many possible ways, and I agree with your case. They nodded in agreement with the boy. . Have a great time. πŸ™‚

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      2. Aphrodite says:

        Same to you Jackie. πŸ™‚

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      3. Jackie Jain says:

        Thanks Ankita. . πŸ™‚

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    1. Aphrodite says:

      Thank you. πŸ™‚

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      1. lovehappily says:

        My pleasure. πŸ™‚

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  6. Pen Potter says:

    Bit busy these days but I do make sure that I find time once in a while to read your posts because I can relate to most of them. You know the craft well. Your posts are beautiful. More power to you. πŸ™‚

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    1. Aphrodite says:

      Thank you Wolfie. πŸ™‚ You just made my day. I feel honoured to be appreciated by fellow bloggers. πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Pen Potter says:

        Loved that Wolfie thing haha..

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  7. anaghamurali says:

    its sweet…and heartwarming….just a glimpse of conversation that reflects the beauty of love…..I dont advocate love much….but this post is really nice.

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    1. Aphrodite says:

      Thank you so much. πŸ™‚

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  8. Aadhya says:

    Lovelyy❀️

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    1. Aphrodite says:

      Thanks dear πŸ™‚

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  9. sherinsk says:

    Stars do not really twinkle, they just appear to twinkle when seen from the surface of Earth. πŸ˜›

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    1. Aphrodite says:

      I know the science. But that’s just how I would prefer to look at them. πŸ™‚

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  10. sherinsk says:

    Are me toh masak kar raha tha.As i said you express things beautifully in few words πŸ™‚

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    1. Aphrodite says:

      Arey toh main bhi generally hi bata rahi thi ki wo muje pata hai. πŸ™‚ And thank you. πŸ™‚

      Like

  11. Well, you have a beautiful imagination! And I think, I can relate this post to a song..! πŸ™ƒ

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    1. Aphrodite says:

      Thank you so much. BTW, which song?

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      1. Likkhe jo khat tujhe woh teri yaad mein hazaaron rang ke nazaare bangaye.. πŸ™‚ Do you know this song?

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      2. Aphrodite says:

        Haan suna hai. Nice one. πŸ™‚

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    1. Aphrodite says:

      Thank you Ayush. πŸ™‚ This makes me so happy. Yay!

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Ayush Saini says:

        ☺😊

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  12. antara_nandy says:

    So beautifully written, Ankita!!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Aphrodite says:

      Thank you, you bful girl. :*

      Liked by 1 person

      1. antara_nandy says:

        Welcome, you b’ful girl. 😁

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  13. Sahana says:

    Hey! That’s awesome!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Aphrodite says:

      Thank you. Happy that you liked it. πŸ™‚

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